Editing

Today, we have learn Editing, Cops, Capitalization, Mission, Puncuation, Spelling, And also, Clues, Conherence, Language,Unity,Emphasis, Support, and Sentences. We have learn Exercise#2 Revising and editing, a first Draft. One evening in 1968 while, I was working the swing shift at the general tire recapping plant I came up with the greatest pain of my life because, of a terrible accident raw rubber , was heated up in a large tank. Prior towards. being fed into an extruder. When the lowering platform, was in the up position the chain snapped. It sending the heavy platform, was in the up position the chain snapped. it sending the heavy platform crashing down into the tank. Unfortunatly. I was in it's path. The wave hit my back just above my waist Then suddenly pain took my breath away. Another, we had completed the exercise of Variety of sentence patterns, Variety of sentence patterns, fragment, Comma spice, run ons and editing, Clustering, Brainstorming.

Exercise#2 Today we also when through Revising and editing a first draft.
Exercise# 3 Same as exercise 2 writing and deleting words that did not make any sense at all.