Monday, September 19, 2011

Today's Activity

Today was a really interesting class for me because when we edited those essays from the text book, I changed a few things around in a different way as to be compared to the corrections we discussed. I found that this activity is very useful because it allows us to properly correct our papers when we edit or to correct someone's paper properly when asked.

5 comments:

  1. Goood job Joy JOY! Your so smart, I totally agree with you! (:

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  2. Enjoyed the editing as well. Practicing the editing helps to improve our own essays or thesis.

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  3. I believe one of the difficult processes of editing is trying to keep the meaning of the sentence the same while you change the words in the sentence.

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  4. Yes, it is interesting to see those different types of corrections being made.

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  5. I believe that there are so many different ways to edit sentences. Not everybody will get the same exact answers all the time.

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